This is a piece I had to write for a class of mine this late spring.
It's my favourite of mine so far.
It is a first draft, so please feel free to suggest changes, or point out any flaws, typographical errors, et cetera.


The story is basic man meets woman and he is infatuated with her. But on a train!
It's a simple short story.
I would like to know if it's easy to follow, and if the dialogue is okay. And the things stated at the top too.
And... level four.

Love,
Emma